Comic 6 - Issue #4 Page 5

19th May 2016, 7:52 PM in HOTWAB 1
Issue #4 Page 5
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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Shaneoid 8th Jul 2016, 9:59 AM edit delete
Shaneoid









Not a great deal to add to this, the warehouse interior was a big project to get done and it taught me a lot. Looking back a year on from this I can see that I like using huge panels to make things look more dramatic and epic, which I'm not sure is a webcomic faux pas or not. I should also comment, I used a wire frame for the warehouse, the decoration was all done by my good self.













Comments:

Bracey 26th Jul 2016, 7:51 AM edit delete reply
Great page, the colors really establish that its night out and I love the dialogue in this. One thing though, If the narration and the character (Ghostmoth) aren't the same thing then Id color the speech boxes differently than his speech bubbles. It gives the impression that he is narrating himself in the third person.
Jason Gray 20th Oct 2016, 6:04 AM edit delete reply
Jason Gray
Love the armosphere

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